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8 February 12

Blah! Bad Dialogue! BAD!

Bad dialogue is my pet peeve…I can take almost anything if the dialogue is crisp.

I am reading a book my sister suggested. It’s about shoe-aholics.


And this line is in it.

“When the shoe fits, you find Prince Charming.”

YIKES.

  1. shearsandsnares said: Nooooo!
  2. falldowntheblackhole reblogged this from gailsimone
  3. gorgeous-monsters said: Worded a bit differently, that line could be cute enough…but the way it is? It’s just sad.
  4. schwathing reblogged this from gailsimone and added:
    think I choked on
  5. planb-becomeapirate said: Step away from the book, Gail… nice and easy…
  6. dreamsofawesome said: Coming from the gal who wrote Batgirl #3 =b
  7. lucya said: whoa that is seriously bad, I agree. ouch.
  8. irritatingarchery said: that’s….a little bit painful to read
  9. deliciouskaek said: oh… eww.
  10. wonderlandleighleigh said: *cringe*
  11. itswalky said: Like, he’s inside the shoe? Sweet.
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